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Final Reflection
I think my most formative experience in this class was doing the idea napkin. That was the first time I put down all my ideas in a connected...
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For this exercise, I chose to read the book "How to Fail at Almost Everything and Still Win Big" by Scott Adams. The main message ...
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Opportunity I identified an opportunity with motivated, low-wage workers. These are most likely people that didn’t go to college, or didn...
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1. The air conditioning in my room never works properly and my room is always 7 degrees colder or warmer than what i...
Hi Abby,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great pitch. You are dressed professionally,you speak in a clear and intelligent manner, and have a great idea. You definitely have me sold. I would take one of these classes if I was given the option. In terms of improvements, try to memorize your script next time so you are not looking away from the camera from time to time. Keep up the great work Abby!
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ReplyDeleteHey Abby!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your pitch. Your professional dressing and eloquent, professional speaking really aid in making your idea look like an excellent idea to potential investors. I think you did a really good job of not completely relying on a script, which is always great to see, but in order to further improve your pitch you may want to consider fully memorizing it for next time. Awesome job overall!
Hi Abby,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch. Right from the beginning i was hooked in and wanted to hear about your idea all the way through. I like how you included statistics about income inequality and were able to professionally reference them in your pitch to help back up your idea. Overall, this was really well done. I think that the only problem was that it seemed like you were reading off a script, but it wasn't that noticeable.