https://youtu.be/TzK2J_pBxxM
Friday, March 20, 2020
Pitch 2
The feedback I received from my last pitch was very helpful. My professional dress was a positive aspect of the pitch, although that won't be as prevalent in this one as I am not with my wardrobe due to coronavirus. I was also told that the statistics I provided in my pitch helped the presentation and understanding of my business idea. The main thing that was keeping my pitch from being a success was that it wasn't memorized, which kept me from being as persuasive. This is something I worked on when developing my second pitch, and I hope that the delivery has improved because of it. I also changed some of the wording and phrasing of the pitch so that it would flow more smoothly, and hopefully be more convincing. The feedback I received in my first pitch was very helpful in developing my second pitch, and it feels much more polished now.
https://youtu.be/TzK2J_pBxxM
https://youtu.be/TzK2J_pBxxM
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Hello Abby,
ReplyDeleteI remember watching your first elevator pitch a few weeks ago. I have to say that you improved immensely. You clearly kept the positive aspects of the first pitch and got rid of the negatives. Just make sure your dog is quiet next time you record so there is no noise between you and the receiver of your message. Keep practicing and you will continue to get better!